Thursday, November 12, 2009

contrast poem

Contrast Poems

Our elder years—
relieved, relaxed, accomplished,
mature and qualified,
passing on teachings,
the knowledgably.

Our teenage years—
wild, rebellious, boisterous,
unaware and careless,
learning to grow up,
the inexperienced.

1 comment:

  1. knowledgably or knowledgeable? You need the "e" to maintain the soft g sound.

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